Authenticity in Crime Writing – Using Realistic Police Jargon in ‘Blind Murder’
Crime fiction is one of the most widely read genres, and for good reason—it allows readers to step into the high-pressure world of law enforcement, solving cases and uncovering dark secrets. However, nothing disrupts the immersion of a good crime novel more than inauthentic police dialogue. When authors rely on clichés, inaccurate terminology, or overly simplified investigations, seasoned crime readers quickly notice.
Blind Murder stands out because of the authentic use of police jargon and investigative procedures. I’m a retired cop, so I should understand police protocols. The book immerses readers in the real world of policing, making them feel like they’re part of the investigation alongside Jake Jordan, the protagonist.
Why Police Jargon Matters in Crime Fiction
Accuracy in crime writing is crucial to maintaining credibility. Readers who are familiar with law enforcement—or even avid fans of true crime—can quickly spot inaccuracies. Police jargon, when used correctly, adds depth and realism to the narrative. In Blind Murder, terms such as Three Nines, meaning a 999 emergency call, or SIO, meaning Senior Investigating Officer or SOCO, meaning Scenes of Crime Office, now better known as CSI, Crime Scene Investigator, become woven into the dialogue, reflecting how real officers communicate. These details aren’t just for show; they enhance the story’s believability, ensuring readers’ experience policing as it truly is, not as television dramas portray it.
Balancing Realism and Readability
The greatest strength is its ability to balance realism with readability. Some authors risk overwhelming readers with excessive technical language, but I like to think the book integrates police terminology to enhance the story without bogging it down. For example, when Jordan and his colleagues arrive at a crime scene, their dialogue mirrors real-life police interactions. They assess the situation, use proper radio protocol, and interact with forensic teams using precise language. However, this doesn’t slow the pacing—if anything, it makes the tension feel even more authentic.
The Psychological Impact of Realistic Dialogue
Beyond the terminology, Blind Murder captures the emotional and psychological weight of police work through its language. Officers don’t simply analyze crime scenes with detached professionalism; their words and tone reveal their anxieties, instincts, and camaraderie. Readers witness how rookies like Jordan struggle to fit in at the start of the book, how experienced officers react under pressure, and how moments of dark humor emerge even in grim situations.
This level of authenticity sets my book apart ( I think) from crime novels that rely on exaggerated drama rather than the challenges law enforcement professionals face.
Why Readers Appreciate Realism in Crime Fiction
With the rise of true crime documentaries and police procedurals, readers have become more informed about real investigative work. A crime novel without authenticity can feel shallow, whereas a well-researched one will resonate deeply.
By incorporating realistic police jargon, I can enhance the immersive experience of the book, drawing readers into the world of criminal investigations without sacrificing engagement. This commitment to authenticity is why Blind Murder appeals not only to casual crime fiction fans but also to those with a deeper knowledge of law enforcement.
Final Thoughts
For crime fiction to be truly engaging, it needs more than just a good mystery—it requires realism, depth, and immersive storytelling. Blind Murder achieves this by using genuine police jargon, procedural accuracy, and character-driven dialogue that reflects the challenges of real-world policing.